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I feel the pain in my head,
As rage grips my mind like a claw.
I now see with clarity the Woman in Black,
Radiant as the sun and without flaw.
Her ashen face cloaked by an exquisite veil,
Like the sun eclipses the moon.
As she beckons me closer with half a smile,
A step forward and I’m ready to swoon.
Her beautiful face turns murky with every step,
As my head throbs with a need for release.
Is it folly to continue on this treacherous path,
Or is it destiny calling in all its wrath.
I choose to move onward, pain now gripping my heart,
While the epitome of beauty casts down her impenetrable veil.
To reveal not a face of serenity,
But one ravaged to all extremity.
I try to run but the agony is far too great,
Falling to the ground, flashes of white seize my mind.
Peace engulfs me in its arms as I take my final breath,
Looking at the Woman in Black who was nothing but death.
That was pretty good, especially the last part. Keep on writing.
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I shall. Stay tuned for my next post.
And do read my previous article 🙂
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It is so well written! I really enjoyed it till the end! The end was beautiful… Brought a smile on my face.
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Beautiful women who portray death ?
That makes you smile ?
Im guessing you’re a strong hardcore feminist.
Thank you so much.
And please do read my other posts and leave your wonderful thoughts behind 🙂
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Smile was for the way you had the whole twist in the tale… I was expecting death right there but then peace walks in and made the whole twist and that was beautiful
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You have a wonderful perspective of things 🙂
Thank you.
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And you guessed me right, a feminist I am.
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