Moon Dance

Gracefully glide over dew robed grass

Vault over a thousand shards of glass
This isn’t the time to be bound to the past
Memories aside, away they are cast

Elegant dance through the starlit night
Doused in the silver essence of moonlight
Finally some space to openly breathe
Far apart from your monstrous creed

Soul wide open, aching for release
Pirouette in the dark, emotions unleashed
Reached the murky depths of my very being
This is the time, I shall not be fleeing

Light a fire as glorious as the Aurora
Creatures of the night released by Pandora
Ray of light extinguish these monstrosities
Dawn arrives, inhale the breeze.

23 comments on “Moon Dance

  1. ady says:

    Dawn comes with the brightest hopes after a long night ….:)


  2. Fiona says:

    beautiful. 🙂


  3. K. A. Brace says:

    Just wanted to let you know I stopped by to view your work. Smiles…Best >KB


  4. This one is one of the most quirky pieces I’ve read. Great work, also you have an amazing publishing speed. Keep it up.


  5. kalabalu says:

    Watch out..don’t sneeze 🙂


  6. I enjoyed this, Obsidian Visionary. It resonates well with me, and resembles some of the feelings and experience I have been trying to express in my current work on my blog. Thank you for your invitation to come here and read– I wanted to do so anyway, but had not gotten to it yet. I like the image you have to head the poem up also. Set me in the right mood to receive the poem.

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  7. JoDee Luna says:

    Love your poem, Moon Dance. It really calls to the heart. Well written!


  8. mark says:

    I love the fact that you rhymed Aurora with Pandora, very original.
    Thanks for the read,

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  9. InSight says:

    You are a young poet. Keep going. Keep dreaming. Keep hanging in there. I “get it”. Your work comes from your soul, and writing is your unique way of expressing. Writing, art, poetry – they are not only meant to be shared so that others can identify, but also these arts are very therapeutic. Keep writing!

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  10. Fallen Angel says:

    Though there has never been a poem written by you that every managed to disappoint me in any way and every one of them is a bful piece of art…this is my new favourite!! i just enjoy reading this because of the imagery it creates!


  11. aleksisfaust says:

    Reblogged this on Aleksis Faust and commented:
    This person is going places. “Vault over a thousand shards of glass”.


  12. aleksisfaust says:

    “An unkindness of ravens” “vault over a thousand shards of glass” – I haven’t read the entirety of your work, but you have so much freaking potential. Those lines, which are stellar, are eventually going to litter the lines of your poetry. I’m sure of it.


  13. Fallen Angel says:

    Reblogged this on Scripts of My Heart and commented:
    One amzing post but one amazing author….this is my personal favourite..(one among the all)
    def read his blog and every other post of his


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