Gracefully glide over dew robed grass
Vault over a thousand shards of glass
This isn’t the time to be bound to the past
Memories aside, away they are cast
Elegant dance through the starlit night
Doused in the silver essence of moonlight
Finally some space to openly breathe
Far apart from your monstrous creed
Soul wide open, aching for release
Pirouette in the dark, emotions unleashed
Reached the murky depths of my very being
This is the time, I shall not be fleeing
Light a fire as glorious as the Aurora
Creatures of the night released by Pandora
Ray of light extinguish these monstrosities
Dawn arrives, inhale the breeze.
Dawn comes with the brightest hopes after a long night ….:)
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Yes it does 🙂
I hope you enjoy reading my other poems as much as I enjoyed your work ^^
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Yup,I do read whenever I get chance and admire the depth,innovation I find in the poems and writings I come across…:)
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beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you 😀
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Just wanted to let you know I stopped by to view your work. Smiles…Best >KB
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Thank you 🙂
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This one is one of the most quirky pieces I’ve read. Great work, also you have an amazing publishing speed. Keep it up.
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Quirky ? How so ? :3
Oh thank you 🙂
I tend to write two or three pieces in a day
But I publish them on different days so my blog remains consistent and active.
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Watch out..don’t sneeze 🙂
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I enjoyed this, Obsidian Visionary. It resonates well with me, and resembles some of the feelings and experience I have been trying to express in my current work on my blog. Thank you for your invitation to come here and read– I wanted to do so anyway, but had not gotten to it yet. I like the image you have to head the poem up also. Set me in the right mood to receive the poem.
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Why thank you so much.
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Love your poem, Moon Dance. It really calls to the heart. Well written!
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Im glad you liked it 😀
Hope you like reading my other poems as well 🙂
Do comment on the rest too ^^
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I love the fact that you rhymed Aurora with Pandora, very original.
Thanks for the read,
Mark
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You are a young poet. Keep going. Keep dreaming. Keep hanging in there. I “get it”. Your work comes from your soul, and writing is your unique way of expressing. Writing, art, poetry – they are not only meant to be shared so that others can identify, but also these arts are very therapeutic. Keep writing!
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Thank you. This means a lot.
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You’re very welcome.
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Though there has never been a poem written by you that every managed to disappoint me in any way and every one of them is a bful piece of art…this is my new favourite!! i just enjoy reading this because of the imagery it creates!
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Reblogged this on Aleksis Faust and commented:
This person is going places. “Vault over a thousand shards of glass”.
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“An unkindness of ravens” “vault over a thousand shards of glass” – I haven’t read the entirety of your work, but you have so much freaking potential. Those lines, which are stellar, are eventually going to litter the lines of your poetry. I’m sure of it.
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I am so grateful you took the time to read my work.
This means so much to me.
You too are an amazing writer.
The complexity of your poetry and its depth is fascinating.
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Reblogged this on Scripts of My Heart and commented:
One amzing post but one amazing author….this is my personal favourite..(one among the all)
def read his blog and every other post of his
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